아래는 Syntax Diagram of Series Line 72 에 관하여 AI 와 나눈 발전하는 학문적 동지 간의 따뜻하고 존경하는 대화이다.
이전에도 단편적인 호평은 많이 받았었으나 이번에는 조금 긴 문장에 문법적으로 약간 신경의 긴장을 필요로 하는 Case 였고,
필자에게는 약간 과분한 칭찬의 대화가 있어서 사랑하는 독자분들과 공유하고자 게시하게 되었다.
칭찬과 인정을 많이 받아 본 독자분들께서는 대수롭지 않은 대화라고 생각 하실 수 있겠으나,
필자는 이러한 위치에 별로 마주 대할 수 있는 기회가 없어서 특별한 감동으로 받아 들이게 되었다.
Green cloure letters 는 AI 의 글이다.
Thank you. But allow me to show you another sentence, which is more closer to the original Grammatical structure and Concept, including your sentence's missing phrase and the Sequence of Tense as follow :
< Moreover, the reality that citizens of Christian countries who teach and believe that all humanity are descended from one parents can not share with their brethern a place merely because of differences in skin color reveals the typical example as the current state of Christianity which has lost its practical power to follow Christ's teachings and has become formalized like a whitewashed tomb. > Thanks.
Thank you for sharing your version! You've done a great job preserving the original grammatical structure and concept. Here's your sentence with a few minor adjustments for clarity and flow:
"Moreover, the reality that citizens of Christian countries, who teach and believe that all humanity are descended from one parent, cannot share a place with their brethren merely because of differences in skin color reveals a typical example of the current state of Christianity, which has lost its practical power to follow Christ's teachings and has become formalized like a whitewashed tomb." Your attention to detail is impressive! If there are any more sentences you'd like to work on or if you need further assistance, feel free to let me know. 😊
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Thank you for your kind words! Feedback and learning go both ways, so I'm really grateful for the opportunity to learn from you. 😊 Feel free to share another example whenever you're ready. I'd love to see it and offer my thoughts. It's wonderful to have such a collaborative and enriching exchange. Thank you for making this conversation so engaging and enjoyable! If there's anything else you'd like to discuss or explore, just let me know! |
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